Rewrite Naruto to Fix Continuity Errors
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Author's shameless review here. This fanfiction is my first story so feel free to correct my mistakes so I can make this fanfiction better. Thank you.
1yr
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1mth
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3mth
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One of my favorites, characters have emotions unlike other mc is loving to his love one, smart, and cunning, come to the dark side we have cookies.
3mth
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3mth
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It started off really good! Until the Author started writing about the MC having kids at 12. Then controlling is nut to only have girls. Then talking about marrying his kid in the future. His own daughter.... Really weird group of people that like this. Author literally said in the comments its good to keep it in the Family.... Kreep
4mth
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Too many plot holes and continuity errors. The author notes actually say things like "There are plot holes in this chapter, ignore them and just enjoy" and "I don't care about how this is supposed to happen, meh the important thing is protagonist can get more girls now". Also, there is blatant bias against Sakura in at least upto the chapters I have read, so skip this if you like Sakura.
4mth
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This was interesting, to say the least. Enjoyable to pass the time. Can't really say anything about it that I really hate, or dislike, it was meant to be a fun perverted naruto fan-fiction, and it delivered, can't complain.
4mth
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gotta make Madara sexually confused
5mth
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5mth
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Just read it. I trust you'll make the correct judgement (5 stars, masterpiece), like I did. .
5mth
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6mth
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6mth
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7mth
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7mth
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I really liked it if you are tired of reading serious novels and want to relax? Then this is definitely for you! And one more thing, can you offer something similar, with the same atmosphere? I will be grateful! (P.s google translate)
7mth
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MC is on his way to be completely OP. That's just the way the story intended to be and imo it is good. It is a comedy with a balanced amount of lemon situations. Actually what i like the most in this fan-fic is a pace of the story. Good amount of time skips , but they are justified and explained accordingly. This story isn't really serious , comedy is the main part of the whole plot here. And it's good comedy , at least better than most )
7mth
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I will give 5 just purely because it's enjoyable. Really great work author. I think author should write some original novel. I am serious. I don't know how can you even get ideas to write like this. For those who like to reviews before start the story I really recommend this one you may fine it boring at the start but you will like it on later chapters.
8mth
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Revisión honesta después de leer esto, la cuestión es que mc se convierte en una trampa y Naruto, sasuke, itachi, madara, orichumaru la follan. Este libro es solo para M y trampas
8mth
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Extremely boring fan fiction. The characters are banal NPCs. The dialogues between the characters are stupid and monotonous, I constantly see praise for the main character there. The author, it seems, has never met a girl, relationships are not built like that, well, no, at 6-10 years old to arrange a "sexy" massage, from what do girls end up? What kind of nonsense is this? Why are there so many spam reviews without any normal criticism? Although what do I expect from working in webnovel, especially with the tag "harem".
8mth
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este ff es increíble lol, la escritura, el diseño de personajes y el fondo mundial, en general 5.0, pero ¿puedes hacer que Chap sea largo? solo sugerencia 😃 y la imagen de este ff es basura lol solo cámbiala por favor para llamar la atención de los lectores ☺️
8mth
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Voy a ser honesto. ¿Buscas una trama profunda e interesante? no para ti. ¿Buscas un desarrollo de carácter intenso? no para ti. Esta es solo una lectura divertida con algo de comedia, sexo y una trama fácil de entender. Disfrútalo como una lectura casual.
8mth
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8mth
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it's the best fanfic of naruto that I have seen so far I really love it please continue to release this book I look forward to it best wishes to you author
8mth
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8mth
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One of the best novel i have read. The Author of this novel clearly understood what's the reader want. I like the idea of this novel, a really really good novel.
8mth
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8mth
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